Caribbean cruise getting away with all these people Published by Jeannie Martin Jeannie Martin is a haiku teacher and poet living in the Boston area. View all posts by Jeannie Martin
Nice. Similar in tone to George Swede's 'alone at last' but with a twist in the other direction. Reply
__Jeannie, your nifty verse has generated this, my contrary view; a lone race with the clouds. I thank you. _m a kayak scuds across this silent pond low clouds Reply
Nice Jeannie. I didn't think of it, but I agree with Bob Lucky. The tone is similar but for sure a twist in the other direction. Thanks to both of you. Reply
Sure the irony that other posters have mentioned. Could also read it as–the poet is getting away on a Caribbean cruise, and there are all these people also getting away, each one from the circumstance of his/her life. Reply
Nice. Similar in tone to George Swede's 'alone at last' but with a twist in the other direction.
__Jeannie, your nifty verse has generated this, my contrary view; a lone race with the clouds. I thank you. _m
a kayak
scuds across this silent pond
low clouds
Nice Jeannie.
I didn't think of it, but I agree with Bob Lucky. The tone is similar but for sure a twist in the other direction. Thanks to both of you.
The irony in this one made me smile. :)
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Sure the irony that other posters have mentioned.
Could also read it as–the poet is getting away on a Caribbean cruise, and there are all these people also getting away, each one from the circumstance of his/her life.
This is way better than a brick & mortar essmnlithaebt.