Michelle Schaefer is a member and current President of Haiku Northwest in the Seattle area. She has been published in Frogpond, Acorn and Modern Haiku. She lives in Bothell Washington where she finds inspiration for writing and living.
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I like the way this haiku has "room enough" for different interpretations. Are the separate dreams a sign of alienation in the relationship, or the hallmark of a healthy partnership?
Excellent!
Yes.
separate beds
in the morning we share
the same dream
I like the way this haiku has "room enough" for different interpretations. Are the separate dreams a sign of alienation in the relationship, or the hallmark of a healthy partnership?
I also like the openness of this one.
marion