king sized bed
room enough
for separate dreams

5 Responses

  1. gwyn Says:

    Excellent!

  2. MaryJo Says:

    Yes.

  3. janewilliams Says:

    separate beds
    in the morning we share
    the same dream

  4. Sheila Sondik Says:

    I like the way this haiku has "room enough" for different interpretations. Are the separate dreams a sign of alienation in the relationship, or the hallmark of a healthy partnership?

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I also like the openness of this one.

    marion

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