towpath— a blue heron shifts the twilight
(for Lenard D. Moore)
Previous publications: miniwords 2008 haiku contest 3rd place; Haiku Poets Central Maryland 2008 poemsheet ‘lunch break’
—Roberta Beary
Issue 10.2 | 16 August 2010
Lenard, Wonderful moment when time stops and there is that pause between species… Thanks, Merrill
Roberta! That was your haiku! I thought it was Lenard's … but the comment bears up… "Wonderful moment when time stops and there is that pause where two minds meet!" Wonderful…
Nicely done…
Lovely. So much image in such quite words.
Simply wonderful!
Nice one Roberta! ;-)
both subtle and striking…
striking imagery. like it!
You know somethings a good haiku when it's both fresh and new each reading. ;-)
Alan The With Words Haiku Competition 2010: http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html .
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August 16th, 2010 at 4:10 pm
Lenard, Wonderful moment when time stops and there is that pause between species… Thanks, Merrill
August 16th, 2010 at 4:12 pm
Roberta! That was your haiku! I thought it was Lenard's … but the comment bears up… "Wonderful moment when time stops and there is that pause where two minds meet!" Wonderful…
August 16th, 2010 at 9:48 pm
Nicely done…
August 16th, 2010 at 11:12 pm
Lovely. So much image in such quite words.
August 17th, 2010 at 1:13 am
Simply wonderful!
August 17th, 2010 at 1:32 am
Nice one Roberta! ;-)
August 18th, 2010 at 12:46 pm
both subtle and striking…
August 18th, 2010 at 3:00 pm
striking imagery. like it!
August 29th, 2010 at 2:18 pm
You know somethings a good haiku when it's both fresh and new each reading. ;-)
Alan
The With Words Haiku Competition 2010: http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html
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