cold light another empty bottle promise
—Marion Clarke
Issue 17.2 | 29 December 2017
. cold light another empty bottle promise
—MARION CLARKE
The cold light of day and still empty promises earlier born out of a bottle of hooch. Excellent monoku.
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Habeas corpus I hold the other ghosts
Alan Summers MG8 (moongarlic issue 8 May 2017) .
Thank you, Alan. I'm pleased you enjoyed this one.
marion
It's uncomfortably accurate which a good poem should be at times.
"Uncomfortably accurate" is a great description of it. Thanks again.
I can feel that cold truth. Great poem.
Thank you, Dawn. I appreciate the comment.
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December 29th, 2017 at 3:31 pm
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cold light another empty bottle promise
—MARION CLARKE
The cold light of day and still empty promises earlier born out of a bottle of hooch. Excellent monoku.
.
Habeas corpus I hold the other ghosts
Alan Summers
MG8 (moongarlic issue 8 May 2017)
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December 30th, 2017 at 5:26 am
Thank you, Alan. I'm pleased you enjoyed this one.
marion
December 30th, 2017 at 6:17 am
It's uncomfortably accurate which a good poem should be at times.
December 30th, 2017 at 6:53 am
"Uncomfortably accurate" is a great description of it. Thanks again.
January 1st, 2018 at 5:07 am
I can feel that cold truth. Great poem.
January 26th, 2018 at 7:57 am
Thank you, Dawn. I appreciate the comment.
marion