cold light another empty bottle promise


6 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    cold light another empty bottle promise


    The cold light of day and still empty promises earlier born out of a bottle of hooch. Excellent monoku.


    Habeas corpus I hold the other ghosts

    Alan Summers
    MG8 (moongarlic issue 8 May 2017)

  2. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Thank you, Alan. I'm pleased you enjoyed this one.


  3. Alan Summers Says:

    It's uncomfortably accurate which a good poem should be at times.

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    "Uncomfortably accurate" is a great description of it. Thanks again.

  5. Dawn Apanius Says:

    I can feel that cold truth. Great poem.

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Thank you, Dawn. I appreciate the comment.


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