our small fire through a hole in the clouds the only star
—Rick Tarquinio
Issue 17.2 | 17 January 2018
. our small fire through a hole in the clouds the only star
—RICK TARQUINIO
Wonderful, and magical, seeing a space in the clouds where a star is shining through, even perhaps opened up by the camp fire and smoke. :-)
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the camp fire burns the misty moon halved by thin cloud
[monoku]
Alan Summers "Stepping Stones: a way into haiku" ed. Martin Lucas ISBN 978-0-9522397-9-6 (British Haiku Society 2007) .
Thanks Alan. It was nice to see this poem in a new place. Hope you're well.
Rick
Brilliant
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January 17th, 2018 at 10:56 am
.
our small fire
through a hole in the clouds
the only star
—RICK TARQUINIO
Wonderful, and magical, seeing a space in the clouds where a star is shining through, even perhaps opened up by the camp fire and smoke. :-)
.
.
the camp fire burns the misty moon halved by thin cloud
[monoku]
Alan Summers
"Stepping Stones: a way into haiku" ed. Martin Lucas
ISBN 978-0-9522397-9-6 (British Haiku Society 2007)
.
January 18th, 2018 at 2:10 am
Thanks Alan. It was nice to see this poem in a new place. Hope you're well.
Rick
June 5th, 2018 at 12:10 am
Brilliant