downstream slightly faster than the debris
—Jim Kacian
Issue 20.1 | 21 April 2020
Nice! Cleared my mind :)
only the wake at the river's bend autumn light
Wow Jim, a wonderful poem, prompting deep introspection and reflection on where I am in the journey. But of course, as a master of the haiku art, you invoke this with a simple yet astute observation of some phenomena of nature.
Really moving (and gets me moving)! Thank you Jim
Strider
Good one, Jim
from here to where the river bends moonlight
This is magic, Jim. I love this one.
I’m right beside you in my kayak, Jim. So easy to picture. Except you’re paddling and I’m drifting. :)
downstream the debris passes me by
I wonder what the emotional turmoil the author is going through.
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April 21st, 2020 at 9:22 am
Nice! Cleared my mind :)
April 21st, 2020 at 5:31 pm
only the wake
at the river's bend
autumn light
April 22nd, 2020 at 12:54 am
Wow Jim, a wonderful poem, prompting deep introspection and reflection on where I am in the journey. But of course, as a master of the haiku art, you invoke this with a simple yet astute observation of some phenomena of nature.
Really moving (and gets me moving)! Thank you Jim
Strider
April 22nd, 2020 at 10:51 am
Good one, Jim
from here to where the river bends moonlight
April 22nd, 2020 at 8:38 pm
This is magic, Jim. I love this one.
April 23rd, 2020 at 11:16 am
I’m right beside you in my kayak, Jim. So easy to picture. Except you’re paddling and I’m drifting. :)
downstream the debris passes me by
May 13th, 2020 at 9:23 am
I wonder what the emotional turmoil the author is going through.