downstream slightly faster than the debris Published by Jim Kacian Jim Kacian is Director of The Haiku Foundation and owner of Red Moon Press, which means he doesn't kayak enough. View all posts by Jim Kacian
Wow Jim, a wonderful poem, prompting deep introspection and reflection on where I am in the journey. But of course, as a master of the haiku art, you invoke this with a simple yet astute observation of some phenomena of nature. Really moving (and gets me moving)! Thank you Jim Strider Reply
I’m right beside you in my kayak, Jim. So easy to picture. Except you’re paddling and I’m drifting. :) downstream the debris passes me by Reply
Nice! Cleared my mind :)
only the wake
at the river's bend
autumn light
Wow Jim, a wonderful poem, prompting deep introspection and reflection on where I am in the journey. But of course, as a master of the haiku art, you invoke this with a simple yet astute observation of some phenomena of nature.
Really moving (and gets me moving)! Thank you Jim
Strider
Good one, Jim
from here to where the river bends moonlight
This is magic, Jim. I love this one.
I’m right beside you in my kayak, Jim. So easy to picture. Except you’re paddling and I’m drifting. :)
downstream the debris passes me by
I wonder what the emotional turmoil the author is going through.