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  1. Wow Jim, a wonderful poem, prompting deep introspection and reflection on where I am in the journey. But of course, as a master of the haiku art, you invoke this with a simple yet astute observation of some phenomena of nature.

    Really moving (and gets me moving)! Thank you Jim

    Strider

  2. I’m right beside you in my kayak, Jim. So easy to picture. Except you’re paddling and I’m drifting. :)

    downstream the debris passes me by

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