snow flurry on an empty street the traffic light turns red
—Dietmar Tauchner
Issue 11.1 | 4 February 2011
The entire poem turns upon a pivot: "empty street"… nice idea – great haiku
the mountain at each crosswalk the ice
now this snow (a sudden winter cloud) and I brake
this town's soul sleeping transformation happens
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the pause theme is nicely resonated; much love…
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February 4th, 2011 at 12:17 pm
The entire poem turns upon a pivot: "empty street"… nice idea – great haiku
February 4th, 2011 at 2:50 pm
the mountain at each crosswalk the ice
February 4th, 2011 at 7:34 pm
now this snow
(a sudden winter cloud)
and I brake
February 5th, 2011 at 3:11 am
this town's soul
sleeping
transformation happens
February 5th, 2011 at 9:07 am
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February 6th, 2011 at 10:07 pm
Brian, if you want to stop your email subscription please visit https://tinywords.com/subscriptions/ or click on the "subscribe" link to the left, and use the form there to enter your email address and unsubscribe.
February 6th, 2011 at 2:11 am
the pause theme is nicely resonated; much love…