Then, I realized it was like water droplets falling on an oil-coated skillet. As the cool droplet hits the oil, it explodes into water vapor spattering hot oil in all directions. This is interesting. I suppose I see this as a metaphor. I enjoyed this very much.
July 19th, 2010 at 5:33 pm
Vividly painted haiku. I can feel the coolness of those shadows. Love it!
July 20th, 2010 at 6:42 pm
This is wonderful. The feeling of the shadows~! Thank you~!
September 8th, 2010 at 10:58 am
At first, I thought it should have read
leaf shadows
spatter on my skin
this heat
Then, I realized it was like water droplets falling on an oil-coated skillet. As the cool droplet hits the oil, it explodes into water vapor spattering hot oil in all directions. This is interesting. I suppose I see this as a metaphor. I enjoyed this very much.
leaf shadows
spatter my skin
this heat