thoughts unspool with the white line road trip
published in Frogpond 34:1
—Sheila Sondik
Issue 11.3 | 3 January 2012
Shiela,
I think this is absolutely lovely the way you've used 'thoughts' with 'unspool'
Much enjoyed, _kala
Thanks so much, Kala. I am a big fan of your work – I'm very happy you liked this poem.
Sheila
There is something magical about a road trip. The driver must keep her eyes on the road, but the thoughts keep unspooling, like that line. With or without passengers to talk to. I enjoyed this.
Thank you, Alison. Glad it resonated with your experience.
Excellent.
Thank you, Helen!
unspool childhood memories threads kite flying
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January 3rd, 2012 at 5:58 pm
Shiela,
I think this is absolutely lovely the way you've used 'thoughts' with 'unspool'
thoughts unspool
with the white line
road trip
Much enjoyed,
_kala
January 3rd, 2012 at 10:09 pm
Thanks so much, Kala. I am a big fan of your work – I'm very happy you liked this poem.
Sheila
January 4th, 2012 at 5:03 am
There is something magical about a road trip. The driver must keep her eyes on the road, but the thoughts keep unspooling, like that line. With or without passengers to talk to. I enjoyed this.
January 4th, 2012 at 9:15 am
Thank you, Alison. Glad it resonated with your experience.
January 5th, 2012 at 11:00 am
Excellent.
January 6th, 2012 at 10:39 am
Thank you, Helen!
September 26th, 2012 at 3:42 am
unspool
childhood memories threads
kite flying