haiku history lecture
doodling
paper lanterns


5 Responses

  1. mechaieh Says:

    Amusing! I like the tension between lack of illumination (i.e., the not listening) and the lanterns.

  2. syllableº17 Says:

    An intriguing senryu, Aubrie Cox. Reminds me of the word transparency required of haiku (et al). To SHOW rather than tell.

    her goldfish
    is watching me
    spring clean

    — sº17

  3. syllableº17 Says:

    Well said, mechaieh. Also, the tension between maps and actuality :

    new satnav
    our car arrives..
    in a field?

    — sº17

  4. carmella jean Says:

    Reminds me of a tanka you once wrote in a similar class–a very different history lesson, of course.

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