haiku history lecture doodling paper lanterns
—Aubrie Cox
Issue 09.1 | 4 March 2010
Amusing! I like the tension between lack of illumination (i.e., the not listening) and the lanterns.
An intriguing senryu, Aubrie Cox. Reminds me of the word transparency required of haiku (et al). To SHOW rather than tell.
her goldfish is watching me spring clean
— sº17
Well said, mechaieh. Also, the tension between maps and actuality :
new satnav our car arrives.. in a field?
Reminds me of a tanka you once wrote in a similar class–a very different history lesson, of course.
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March 4th, 2010 at 2:06 pm
Amusing! I like the tension between lack of illumination (i.e., the not listening) and the lanterns.
March 4th, 2010 at 3:36 pm
An intriguing senryu, Aubrie Cox. Reminds me of the word transparency required of haiku (et al). To SHOW rather than tell.
her goldfish
is watching me
spring clean
— sº17
March 5th, 2010 at 5:24 pm
Well said, mechaieh. Also, the tension between maps and actuality :
new satnav
our car arrives..
in a field?
— sº17
March 11th, 2010 at 3:50 am
Reminds me of a tanka you once wrote in a similar class–a very different history lesson, of course.