last day of vacation— the blackberries won’t let me go
—Alexa Selph
Issue 10.2 | 1 September 2010
The blackberries mention is a little cryptic. Are they the RIM variety?
Sweet! Lovely words, lovely image, lovely thought. I hope this makes it to the eventual anthology of great (and delicious) blackberry poems….gracias Alexa.
Simple, in the best sense, and truthful. Compelling as the experience it describes.
Gave me a big smile – thanks
I like your blackberry story. Here is mine about the end of summer:
Wizened yellow apples along the side of the road. Harbingers.
Stopping for blackberries
small plam in my hand
The lane back to school
It gave me a grin with blackberries stuck between my teeth.
vége a vakációnak – a teli szederfák visszatartanak
flat tire… truckers and pickers full of roses
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September 1st, 2010 at 2:32 pm
The blackberries mention is a little cryptic. Are they the RIM variety?
September 1st, 2010 at 3:14 pm
Sweet! Lovely words, lovely image, lovely thought. I hope this makes it to the eventual anthology of great (and delicious) blackberry poems….gracias Alexa.
September 1st, 2010 at 3:49 pm
Simple, in the best sense, and truthful. Compelling as the experience it describes.
September 1st, 2010 at 9:41 pm
Gave me a big smile – thanks
September 1st, 2010 at 10:08 pm
I like your blackberry story. Here is mine about the end of summer:
Wizened yellow apples
along the side of the road.
Harbingers.
September 2nd, 2010 at 1:44 am
Stopping for blackberries
small plam in my hand
The lane back to school
September 8th, 2010 at 4:44 am
It gave me a grin with blackberries stuck between my teeth.
September 17th, 2010 at 9:52 am
vége a vakációnak –
a teli szederfák
visszatartanak
October 10th, 2010 at 11:47 am
flat tire…
truckers and pickers
full of roses