last day of vacation—
won’t let me go
Issue 10.2 | 1 September 2010
The blackberries mention is a little cryptic. Are they the RIM variety? ;-)
Sweet! Lovely words, lovely image, lovely thought. I hope this makes it to the eventual anthology of great (and delicious) blackberry poems….gracias Alexa.
Simple, in the best sense, and truthful. Compelling as the experience it describes.
Gave me a big smile – thanks :-)
I like your blackberry story. Here is mine about the end of summer:
Wizened yellow apples
along the side of the road.
truckers and pickers
full of roses
Stopping for blackberries
small plam in my hand
The lane back to school
It gave me a grin with blackberries stuck between my teeth.
vége a vakációnak –
a teli szederfák
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