last day of vacation— the blackberries won’t let me go
—Alexa Selph
Issue 10.2 | 1 September 2010
The blackberries mention is a little cryptic. Are they the RIM variety? ;-)
Sweet! Lovely words, lovely image, lovely thought. I hope this makes it to the eventual anthology of great (and delicious) blackberry poems….gracias Alexa.
Simple, in the best sense, and truthful. Compelling as the experience it describes.
Gave me a big smile – thanks :-)
I like your blackberry story. Here is mine about the end of summer:
Wizened yellow apples along the side of the road. Harbingers.
flat tire… truckers and pickers full of roses
Stopping for blackberries
small plam in my hand
The lane back to school
It gave me a grin with blackberries stuck between my teeth.
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September 1st, 2010 at 2:32 pm
The blackberries mention is a little cryptic. Are they the RIM variety? ;-)
September 1st, 2010 at 3:14 pm
Sweet! Lovely words, lovely image, lovely thought. I hope this makes it to the eventual anthology of great (and delicious) blackberry poems….gracias Alexa.
September 1st, 2010 at 3:49 pm
Simple, in the best sense, and truthful. Compelling as the experience it describes.
September 1st, 2010 at 9:41 pm
Gave me a big smile – thanks :-)
September 1st, 2010 at 10:08 pm
I like your blackberry story. Here is mine about the end of summer:
Wizened yellow apples
along the side of the road.
Harbingers.
October 10th, 2010 at 11:47 am
flat tire…
truckers and pickers
full of roses
September 2nd, 2010 at 1:44 am
Stopping for blackberries
small plam in my hand
The lane back to school
September 8th, 2010 at 4:44 am
It gave me a grin with blackberries stuck between my teeth.
September 17th, 2010 at 9:52 am
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