October chill
the silence in this shadow


14 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Good to see you here again Martin.

    Simple two liner, your speciality, which resonate the more you read it.

    Alan

  2. Frances Ruth Harris Says:

    Thank you posting this. Wonderful expression of fall~!

  3. marlene mountain Says:

    two is better tho i long for one

  4. martin1223 Says:

    …but one gets lonely.

  5. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    October light,
    the chill in the sunshine.

  6. isafakir Says:

    october
    chill
    no football, no short pants

  7. isafakir Says:

    october
    chill
    blanket over my feet

  8. isafakir Says:

    change

    blanket over cold feet

  9. isafakir Says:

    october
    chill
    kids all at school

  10. isafakir Says:

    october
    rain
    like winter

  11. isafakir Says:

    october
    chill
    more rain today

  12. martin1223 Says:

    Thanks everyone for your comments and poems. This site is better than ever. It is good to be here to watch this idea thrive.

  13. Alan Summers Says:

    And see your haiku here too!

    Alan

  14. petertwo.oh Says:

    Summer light ebbs.
    Autumn evening
    begins to fall.

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