cold winter rain
the swollen creek also
rushing home


9 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Excellent!

    Mine is the opposite of your's but I was indoors, inside a warm hotel room, enjoying a torrential cold winter rainstorm.

    bouncing rain
    I force the hotel window
    a little wider

    Alan Summers
    Blithe Spirit March 2012; Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)

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  2. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Good work, deeply chilling, thought provoking.

    Good work. Deeply chilling and also thought provoking.

  3. Kathabela Wilson Says:

    There is something almost jovial to the feeling of this… in that there is a home to run to. Also the beautiful contrast of cold running to warm (home)… and the oneness of the creek with the one also running… you, human, animal… I love the openness and rushing feeling of it all.

  4. Wilda Morris Says:

    This is my favorite!

  5. Madhuri Says:

    Can hear and see the rapid, gurgling swollen creek, beautifully done.

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I found this one quite dark and 'swollen creek' made me think of 'swollen cheek'. Intriguing.

  7. ragandboneshop1 Says:

    Wonderful- love the sights and sounds in this very moving piece

  8. Stephen Kusch Says:

    Very beautiful. It made me think of the Wissahickon Creek, in Phila., where I grew up (Edgar Allen Poe mentions this area in one or two stories).

    covered bridge
    the river's chill seeping
    from underneath

  9. Annette Makino Says:

    Thank you all for the interesting and encouraging comments!

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