day moon even here I?m somewhere else
—Bob Lucky
Issue 13.2 | 27 August 2013
It's always an occasion to read a Bob Lucky haiku:
day moon even here I’m somewhere else
day moon a foreign coin in my change
It's that ghostly day moon again…where will it takes us next? This is a great one-liner
Beautiful! I echo what Alan says!
I read this cool haiku as a wonderful commentary on the mind and challenges of being mindful.
admiring the man in the moon— his five o'clock shadow . . .
Thank you for this beautiful haiku.
I love the matter-of-factness of this I see a person working on a practical, even mundane, task, or in a place that doesn't feel particularly inspiring ('even here') who suddenly becomes distracted by the beauty of the day moon. A great one.
marion
A wonderfully spiritual one-line haiku. Thank you Bob!
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August 27th, 2013 at 10:37 am
It's always an occasion to read a Bob Lucky haiku:
day moon even here I’m somewhere else
—Bob Lucky
August 27th, 2013 at 11:35 am
day moon
a foreign coin
in my change
August 27th, 2013 at 2:01 pm
It's that ghostly day moon again…where will it takes us next? This is a great one-liner
August 27th, 2013 at 8:49 pm
Beautiful! I echo what Alan says!
August 27th, 2013 at 10:48 pm
I read this cool haiku as a wonderful commentary on the mind and challenges of being mindful.
August 28th, 2013 at 11:09 am
admiring the man
in the moon—
his five o'clock shadow . . .
Thank you for this beautiful haiku.
August 30th, 2013 at 12:45 am
I love the matter-of-factness of this I see a person working on a practical, even mundane, task, or in a place that doesn't feel particularly inspiring ('even here') who suddenly becomes distracted by the beauty of the day moon. A great one.
marion
August 31st, 2013 at 7:29 am
A wonderfully spiritual one-line haiku.
Thank you Bob!
Strider