day moon even here I’m somewhere else


8 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    It's always an occasion to read a Bob Lucky haiku:

    day moon even here I’m somewhere else

    —Bob Lucky

  2. Brandon Bordelon Says:

    day moon
    a foreign coin
    in my change

  3. TeP Says:

    It's that ghostly day moon again…where will it takes us next? This is a great one-liner

  4. sanjuktaa Says:

    Beautiful! I echo what Alan says!

  5. Bruce F Says:

    I read this cool haiku as a wonderful commentary on the mind and challenges of being mindful.

  6. Alexa Selph Says:

    admiring the man
    in the moon—
    his five o'clock shadow . . .

    Thank you for this beautiful haiku.

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I love the matter-of-factness of this I see a person working on a practical, even mundane, task, or in a place that doesn't feel particularly inspiring ('even here') who suddenly becomes distracted by the beauty of the day moon. A great one.

    marion

  8. haikuapprentice Says:

    A wonderfully spiritual one-line haiku.
    Thank you Bob!

    Strider

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