an evening
of tangled thoughts . . .
through branches
even this rugged moon
looks tattered at the edges

 

 

(originally appeared in American Tanka – June 2012)


2 Responses

  1. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    The 'tangled thoughts' made me think of me think of intrigue and perhaps deceit and the tattered moon a relationship that is in pieces. Very nice, Kala.

    marion

  2. kalaramesh Says:

    Thanks a ton, Marion :)

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