Perseid shower I fall with every star
(This haiku won Honorable Mention in the 19th Mainichi Haiku Contest)
—Irena Szewczyk
Issue 16.1 | 17 June 2016
Wonderful!
__As always Iris… well written, and well seen_! _m
Very well done. A good pairing.
The power of this, to me is tremendous. Experiencing the awe with, “…I fall with every star” is transcendent in my arrogant opinion!
Beautiful match, very striking image and metaphor.
Beautifully captured, Irena. :)
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June 17th, 2016 at 9:48 am
Wonderful!
June 17th, 2016 at 1:21 pm
__As always Iris… well written, and well seen_!
_m
June 17th, 2016 at 2:16 pm
Very well done. A good pairing.
June 19th, 2016 at 11:32 am
The power of this, to me is tremendous. Experiencing the awe with, “…I fall with every star” is transcendent in my arrogant opinion!
June 19th, 2016 at 2:42 pm
Beautiful match, very striking image and metaphor.
August 15th, 2016 at 8:00 am
Beautifully captured, Irena. :)