Perseid shower I fall with every star

Perseid shower
I fall
with every star

(This haiku won Honorable Mention in the 19th Mainichi Haiku Contest)

6 Responses

  1. andreacecon Says:


  2. magyar Says:

    __As always Iris… well written, and well seen_!

  3. MaryJo Says:

    Very well done. A good pairing.

  4. martin1223 Says:

    The power of this, to me is tremendous. Experiencing the awe with, “…I fall with every star” is transcendent in my arrogant opinion!

  5. janewilliams Says:

    Beautiful match, very striking image and metaphor.

  6. marykendall Says:

    Beautifully captured, Irena. :)

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