drive-by splash . . .
the line of pre-schoolers drenched
in delight


3 Responses

  1. Pravat Says:

    The beautiful image has been aptly portrayed by Julie in the haiku. The word phrase 'drenched in delight' sounds musical.

    merry time
    children in the open ground
    collecting rain

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Kokako – 13, September 2010

  2. Janet Butler Says:

    Charming!

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Children love splashing about in the rain – they don't care if their clothes get wet, and so they shouldn't. Childhood is a carefree time and this haiku shows us that. It's also very visual and easy to hear the splash as the car drives past. Lovely, Julie.

    marion

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