Children love splashing about in the rain – they don't care if their clothes get wet, and so they shouldn't. Childhood is a carefree time and this haiku shows us that. It's also very visual and easy to hear the splash as the car drives past. Lovely, Julie.
May 24th, 2018 at 8:18 pm
The beautiful image has been aptly portrayed by Julie in the haiku. The word phrase 'drenched in delight' sounds musical.
merry time
children in the open ground
collecting rain
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Kokako – 13, September 2010
May 25th, 2018 at 4:15 am
Charming!
May 30th, 2018 at 9:57 am
Children love splashing about in the rain – they don't care if their clothes get wet, and so they shouldn't. Childhood is a carefree time and this haiku shows us that. It's also very visual and easy to hear the splash as the car drives past. Lovely, Julie.
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August 17th, 2018 at 3:16 am
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