wind-carved glaciers
swell & crest across Greenland
crash on granite blocks
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Dylan,
If you like my version better, it’s yours (that is, doesn’t need any annotation with my name). If not, no need to show it.
The comments, a good idea.
Bless,
Bill
Dylan,
If you like my version better, it’s yours (that is, doesn’t need any annotation with my name). If not, no need to show it.
The comments, a good idea.
Bless,
Bill
Thanks, Bill, but I feel your version improves it so much that I owe you some kind of credit.
opaque and frozen
added to my drink …
what spills on granite floor
still at its work
the sea bringing down
the mountain
wind driven clouds –
full moon
playing hide and seek
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