All things presented within “Tinywords,” have the -right of qualty and selection-.
In my perception, I find a few are flat and spurless, most instill solid thoughts and senses… . But these, Ed, are heartful lines that dive much deeper, a wonderful, memory rousing triplet_! Thanks for sharing. M
Complex & intriguing family relationships (involving or affecting at least three people), with a fascinating denouement, all conveyed in ten simple, well-chosen words. Bravo!
powerful haiku..sums up the scent of a long term relationship in three lines..
there’s humor, irony and a great deal of sadness with possibly a sprinkle of postmortem spite…A++
so touching and poignant… I really admire your work: thanks for sharing, Ed.
All things presented within “Tinywords,” have the -right of qualty and selection-.
In my perception, I find a few are flat and spurless, most instill solid thoughts and senses… . But these, Ed, are heartful lines that dive much deeper, a wonderful, memory rousing triplet_! Thanks for sharing. M
Ed,
thanks for the humor and the celebration of all varieties of love, even those that blossom out of its flaws and limitations.
River
Hi Ed…I guess I’m not the only one who was moved by your words…especially father’s grave…I got it. Beth
Complex & intriguing family relationships (involving or affecting at least three people), with a fascinating denouement, all conveyed in ten simple, well-chosen words. Bravo!
Very moving. When what he said was law and the wife went along to keep peace. It elicits such a deep response.
Thank you, Ed.
powerful haiku..sums up the scent of a long term relationship in three lines..
there’s humor, irony and a great deal of sadness with possibly a sprinkle of postmortem spite…A++
magyar, your words are true and aesthetic; deeply zen; equally tercet.
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mother’s name
flood of memories
cross grey marble
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these mornings, while walking longside surging white capped waves, seemingly held in place for my personal viewing, i’m reminded of the temporal…
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reflection
in the brooding waters–
ash stained tears
a deep bow of humility to all
for your kind words.
thanks,
ed
i love the touching humour and cheekiness in this poignant haiku.
i am a fan of your haiku. do you have a book of your haiku i can buy?
august weekend-
at hundredth birthday party
first time she missed her own