Dear Origa, Ha! Those mountains again – your friends! Loved your poem and the feelings it evoked. All the very best to you and your husband. warmly, kala Reply
Thank you very much, dear Kala! Glad you enjoyed :) Yes, they are my dear friends, I love mountains, hiking, rock climbing, etc.! :) Reply
A powerful, understated ku, Origa. chemotherapy— she always liked the way I kissed her hair [In memory of Alma 1936-1981] Reply
_Olga… being home, is most often the best medicine; best wishes to your husband, and to you for the care your giving. Your ku says it all_! -M Reply
Olga Very skillful–your jutaposition of the cardiograph pattern and the distant mountains. Best regards to you and your husband. much love gillena Reply
Origa, such a lovely poem and how wonderful that your husband is at home again. out the window blooming roses smile inside, goodbye Reply
Thank you, Gillena and Barbara! (to others, I responded by email — but your comments didn’t appear in my mailbox, so I respond here). Gillena — thank you for the good wishes! We need them. Barbara — it’s good to know that. All my best to you and yours… Reply
This has all of the right elements. It is modern, and yet has such a classic approach. Wonderful! Andrew Riutta Reply
Thank you for your comments, Allan and Andrew! It is so good to hear such kind words from the wonderful haijins as you are :) Reply
Dear Origa,
Ha! Those mountains again – your friends!
Loved your poem and the feelings it evoked.
All the very best to you and your husband.
warmly,
kala
Thank you very much, dear Kala! Glad you enjoyed :)
Yes, they are my dear friends, I love mountains, hiking, rock climbing, etc.! :)
i liked it very much to read your haiku, Olga
best wishes,
Angelika
Thank you kindly, Angelika! :)
A powerful, understated ku, Origa.
chemotherapy—
she always liked the way
I kissed her hair
[In memory of Alma 1936-1981]
Thank you, dear Bill!
Your haiku is poignant yet deep and beautiful, somehow… Bless you.
Origa, this is excellent!
A deep moment…
All the best for you and your husband
Great double image!
Splendid effect.
Very, very delicate this “distant”. A lot of meanings.
_Olga… being home, is most often the best medicine; best wishes to your husband, and to you for the care your giving. Your ku says it all_!
-M
hearttt murmurs–
remembering conversations
we once had
Olga
Very skillful–your jutaposition of the cardiograph pattern and the distant mountains. Best regards to you and your husband.
much love
gillena
This moment really spoke to me.
Thank you.
Origa, such a lovely poem and how wonderful that your husband is at home again.
out the window
blooming roses smile
inside, goodbye
a very personal, moving haiku, Olga
Thank you, Gillena and Barbara! (to others, I responded by email — but your comments didn’t appear in my mailbox, so I respond here).
Gillena — thank you for the good wishes! We need them.
Barbara — it’s good to know that. All my best to you and yours…
Quietly moving powerful haiku. Those distant mountains resonate!
This has all of the right elements. It is modern, and yet has such a classic approach. Wonderful!
Andrew Riutta
Thank you for your comments, Allan and Andrew! It is so good to hear such kind words from the wonderful haijins as you are :)
autumn dusk
temperatures in the 80’s–
no mountains left to climb