I love this poem. Evocative, simple, eloquent. I wish I knew how to reach the poet because it evokes an image from a poem of mine I would love to share with him.
I love this poem. Evocative, simple, eloquent. I wish I knew how to reach the poet because it evokes an image from a poem of mine I would love to share with him.
December 23rd, 2009 at 10:12 am
lovely, both calm and exciting
December 23rd, 2009 at 12:22 pm
I love this poem. Evocative, simple, eloquent. I wish I knew how to reach the poet because it evokes an image from a poem of mine I would love to share with him.
December 23rd, 2009 at 1:36 pm
Winter Winds Blow
leaves left behind by Fall
into oblivion
December 23rd, 2009 at 2:39 pm
all the new ones very strong; hungarian translation:
?szi lombon ?t
smaragdz?ldcs?v?s f?nyek
sug?r?rv?nye
December 23rd, 2009 at 7:30 pm
hi john i like because it's peculiar in spots like i like. marlene
December 23rd, 2009 at 8:22 pm
I love this poem. Evocative, simple, eloquent. I wish I knew how to reach the poet because it evokes an image from a poem of mine I would love to share with him.
December 23rd, 2009 at 9:36 pm
Winter Winds Blow
leaves left behind by Fall
into oblivion
December 23rd, 2009 at 10:39 pm
all the new ones very strong; hungarian translation:
?szi lombon ?t
smaragdz?ldcs?v?s f?nyek
sug?r?rv?nye
December 24th, 2009 at 3:30 am
hi john i like because it's peculiar in spots like i like. marlene
December 30th, 2009 at 12:25 am
Nice rhythm, with an 'almost' dissonance section. Good to see fine examples of one line haiku.
January 13th, 2010 at 4:32 pm
It’s hard for me to visualize a ‘teal-trailed wake of light.’ What is that?