through autumn leaves a teal-trailed wake of light
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John Barlow
John Barlow co-edited The New Haiku (2002), and since 2007 has been on the editorial staff of The Red Moon Anthology. Other works he has edited have been honored by the Haiku Society of America and the Poetry Society of America. His own books include Waiting for the Seventh Wave (2006) and (with Matthew Paul) Wing Beats: British Birds in Haiku (2008). View all posts by John Barlow
lovely, both calm and exciting
I love this poem. Evocative, simple, eloquent. I wish I knew how to reach the poet because it evokes an image from a poem of mine I would love to share with him.
Winter Winds Blow
leaves left behind by Fall
into oblivion
all the new ones very strong; hungarian translation:
?szi lombon ?t
smaragdz?ldcs?v?s f?nyek
sug?r?rv?nye
hi john i like because it's peculiar in spots like i like. marlene
I love this poem. Evocative, simple, eloquent. I wish I knew how to reach the poet because it evokes an image from a poem of mine I would love to share with him.
Winter Winds Blow
leaves left behind by Fall
into oblivion
all the new ones very strong; hungarian translation:
?szi lombon ?t
smaragdz?ldcs?v?s f?nyek
sug?r?rv?nye
hi john i like because it's peculiar in spots like i like. marlene
Nice rhythm, with an 'almost' dissonance section. Good to see fine examples of one line haiku.
It’s hard for me to visualize a ‘teal-trailed wake of light.’ What is that?