dew frost ~
the horse shivers off
crystal light

13 Responses

  1. David Says:

    Exquisite! I've copied it into my very short list of true gems!

    David in South Dakota

  2. Brian Says:

    writer's block –
    the radiator taps
    in time with my pen

  3. Norman Darlington Says:

    Hi Narayanan – how are you keeping? This haiku is a real sparkler :)

  4. Ay Con Says:

    Exquisite is the perfect word!

  5. genie Says:

    Yes, when somethings really good –there's not much too say.

  6. Frances Ruth Harris Says:

    Wow~! I love it~! Thank you.

  7. Alan Summers Says:

    I love the haiku, and that dew frost!


  8. Narayanan Raghunathan Says:

    Dear friends
    I am honoured you like this Haiku. Norman, I am well. Hope we meet again! Yes, Alan hope all is well with the Renku. I request all of you friends to visit my site for Haiku, Haiga, Haibun, Photo-haiku etc.
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  9. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Yes, lovely poem.

    The seasons are well-pictured here by whether or not the horses are wearing their blankets.

  10. Narayanan Says:

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  11. Carole Dwinell Says:

    I too have seen the crystal shiver on the horses. Manes embellished with diamonds.

  12. Narayanan Says:

    Honoured Carole ~

  13. Ch?vrefeuille Says:

    What a nice haiku Narayanan. I just discovered this tinywords-website. It’s great.

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