please remember about the second layer of this poem – it’s not only a matter of a dog – it is also the fog, something, what is disturbing, what does not allow us to see things they are. So, I’m not so sure, if the person in the poem is walking alone, or maybe with the dog – the person just tells us how does it look like :)
I was understand: if the fog is low, person’s walk with dog (but dog is under visual coverage of the person:
somewhere in the fog, that: no dog).
I’ve a look: realy low fog, that head of walker is up the top of fog’s coat.
Effect: surely with, but without.
Gosiu! Czy to takie, proste znaczenie “low” zastosowa?a? ?
January 26th, 2010 at 12:55 pm
I thoroughly enoy this website and this contribution moved me.
January 26th, 2010 at 2:07 pm
Interesting ku!
January 26th, 2010 at 2:25 pm
This was so intriguing! Thank you!
January 26th, 2010 at 2:26 pm
Quite different for a Haiku, but enjoyable. Maybe you need a cat? You don’t have to walk ’em!
January 26th, 2010 at 2:49 pm
Wonderful! Thanks. This is a haiku I could live by.
January 26th, 2010 at 5:18 pm
autumn walk alone
I find a leash
in my overcoat pocket
January 27th, 2010 at 2:02 am
Thanks for all comments.
Well, Rhoda, it’s quite intersting.
I need a dog to walk (with no-dog), so if I had a cat I could sit by the fire with no cat ;)
January 27th, 2010 at 9:28 am
I love this haiku, having lost a dog recently, I know what it’s like to go on that first walk, alone.
January 27th, 2010 at 3:45 pm
this works because I still feel the tug from the end of an empty leash
January 29th, 2010 at 5:21 pm
Sadness as he misses his dog.
January 30th, 2010 at 4:50 pm
Dear Friends,
please remember about the second layer of this poem – it’s not only a matter of a dog – it is also the fog, something, what is disturbing, what does not allow us to see things they are. So, I’m not so sure, if the person in the poem is walking alone, or maybe with the dog – the person just tells us how does it look like :)
February 22nd, 2010 at 10:30 am
February mists
high up here on the sheep hills
faces come and go
February 22nd, 2010 at 12:34 pm
I was understand: if the fog is low, person’s walk with dog (but dog is under visual coverage of the person:
somewhere in the fog, that: no dog).
I’ve a look: realy low fog, that head of walker is up the top of fog’s coat.
Effect: surely with, but without.
Gosiu! Czy to takie, proste znaczenie “low” zastosowa?a? ?
October 12th, 2010 at 10:05 am
strangers in the fog
fence posts