I live in the Polish seaside city of Gdansk. I like thinking and analysing, but mostly I appreciate the beauty of simplicity. That's why I like haiku. I'm trying to be useful helping people suffering from cancer and teaching them how to write poetry.
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I thoroughly enoy this website and this contribution moved me.
please remember about the second layer of this poem – it’s not only a matter of a dog – it is also the fog, something, what is disturbing, what does not allow us to see things they are. So, I’m not so sure, if the person in the poem is walking alone, or maybe with the dog – the person just tells us how does it look like :)
I was understand: if the fog is low, person’s walk with dog (but dog is under visual coverage of the person:
somewhere in the fog, that: no dog).
I’ve a look: realy low fog, that head of walker is up the top of fog’s coat.
Effect: surely with, but without.
Gosiu! Czy to takie, proste znaczenie “low” zastosowa?a? ?
I thoroughly enoy this website and this contribution moved me.
Interesting ku!
This was so intriguing! Thank you!
Quite different for a Haiku, but enjoyable. Maybe you need a cat? You don’t have to walk ’em!
Wonderful! Thanks. This is a haiku I could live by.
autumn walk alone
I find a leash
in my overcoat pocket
Thanks for all comments.
Well, Rhoda, it’s quite intersting.
I need a dog to walk (with no-dog), so if I had a cat I could sit by the fire with no cat ;)
I love this haiku, having lost a dog recently, I know what it’s like to go on that first walk, alone.
this works because I still feel the tug from the end of an empty leash
Sadness as he misses his dog.
Dear Friends,
please remember about the second layer of this poem – it’s not only a matter of a dog – it is also the fog, something, what is disturbing, what does not allow us to see things they are. So, I’m not so sure, if the person in the poem is walking alone, or maybe with the dog – the person just tells us how does it look like :)
February mists
high up here on the sheep hills
faces come and go
I was understand: if the fog is low, person’s walk with dog (but dog is under visual coverage of the person:
somewhere in the fog, that: no dog).
I’ve a look: realy low fog, that head of walker is up the top of fog’s coat.
Effect: surely with, but without.
Gosiu! Czy to takie, proste znaczenie “low” zastosowa?a? ?
strangers in the fog
fence posts