in an old car an old man and an old dog
—David Serjeant
Issue 10.1 | 14 June 2010
Well done! I really like the use and the repetition of "old"
Great one, David! The repetition rhythmically and visually really works here.
I like the way this makes everything seem older than what came before.
Thank you for the feedback everyone!
Loved this one!
Thanks Jon!
?söreg batárban öregúr vén kutyával
Thank you for the Hungarian tranlsation Gergely!
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June 14th, 2010 at 5:48 pm
Well done! I really like the use and the repetition of "old"
June 14th, 2010 at 9:16 pm
Great one, David! The repetition rhythmically and visually really works here.
June 14th, 2010 at 11:02 pm
I like the way this makes everything seem older than what came before.
June 15th, 2010 at 8:09 am
Thank you for the feedback everyone!
June 15th, 2010 at 8:20 am
Loved this one!
June 15th, 2010 at 12:11 pm
Thanks Jon!
June 15th, 2010 at 5:31 pm
?söreg batárban
öregúr
vén kutyával
June 16th, 2010 at 8:59 am
Thank you for the Hungarian tranlsation Gergely!