David Serjeant lives in Derbyshire, UK, where he works in online communication for a local authority. His work has been published in journals such as Blithe Spirit, Presence, Simply Haiku, Shamrock and Chrysanthemum, amongst others.
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Well done! I really like the use and the repetition of "old"
Well done! I really like the use and the repetition of "old"
Great one, David! The repetition rhythmically and visually really works here.
I like the way this makes everything seem older than what came before.
Thank you for the feedback everyone!
Loved this one!
Thanks Jon!
?söreg batárban
öregúr
vén kutyával
Thank you for the Hungarian tranlsation Gergely!