remission —
in the rear-view the crow
settles back on the roadkill
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David Serjeant
David Serjeant lives in Derbyshire, UK, where he works in online communication for a local authority. His work has been published in journals such as Blithe Spirit, Presence, Simply Haiku, Shamrock and Chrysanthemum, amongst others.
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a rend visszaáll –
a tükörb?l látni a varjút
amint a dögre visszaszáll
a rend visszaáll –
a tükörb?l látni a varjút
amint a dögre visszaszáll
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I like your choice of the word "remission"—well said David Serjeant.
Good haiku. "remission" is certainly a keyword. Moving and strong.