remission — in the rear-view the crow settles back on the roadkill
—David Serjeant
Issue 10.1 | 15 June 2010
a rend visszaáll – a tükörből látni a varjút amint a dögre visszaszáll
http://www.terebess.hu/haiku/serjeant.html
I like your choice of the word "remission"—well said David Serjeant.
Good haiku. "remission" is certainly a keyword. Moving and strong.
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June 16th, 2010 at 10:16 am
a rend visszaáll –
a tükörből látni a varjút
amint a dögre visszaszáll
June 22nd, 2010 at 10:13 pm
http://www.terebess.hu/haiku/serjeant.html
June 23rd, 2010 at 2:49 pm
I like your choice of the word "remission"—well said David Serjeant.
July 3rd, 2010 at 10:06 am
Good haiku. "remission" is certainly a keyword. Moving and strong.