Yes~! This fluid image lives and moves with satisfying mystery. We understand the fog. We have had our own fogs. And for those of us who enjoy the layers of fog we are sometimes given in our natural wild worlds, this is home. Thank you.
Good point, Alan! It is true that most haiku publications shun overt metaphor, and this is more metaphorical than most haiku. But I like it because the imagery is so vivid.
Chicos muchas gracias por los co!ietarnos!!m! Como nos queréis y nosotros a vosotros más aun!!! Nos vemos en el gran día, qué ganas tengo de veros a todos cuando llegue a la iglesia vestida de princesa!!!! Besazos!!!! Jejee!!
I love the picture this paints in my mind. Thank you.
Good one, James!
Yes~! This fluid image lives and moves with satisfying mystery. We understand the fog. We have had our own fogs. And for those of us who enjoy the layers of fog we are sometimes given in our natural wild worlds, this is home. Thank you.
térképvázlat a ködb?l
?k?rszem- és poszátaének
jelzi a fák helyét
Maps for them and maps for us. What a wonderful haiku! Thank you.
Love the idea of singing maps. Beautiful!
James, very clever haiku and even in pattern 5-7-5, congrats! Michael Lee Johnson, poet IL.
enjoyed the metaphor – often outlawed in haiku mags! – Mark
Thanks for the kind comments, everyone.
Nice haiku with natural 5-7-5 form rather than forced syntax and hanging participles etc…
BTW no haiku magazine would outlaw metaphor as many haiku often become metaphoric by default. ;-)
Good point, Alan! It is true that most haiku publications shun overt metaphor, and this is more metaphorical than most haiku. But I like it because the imagery is so vivid.
Chicos muchas gracias por los co!ietarnos!!m! Como nos queréis y nosotros a vosotros más aun!!! Nos vemos en el gran día, qué ganas tengo de veros a todos cuando llegue a la iglesia vestida de princesa!!!! Besazos!!!! Jejee!!