over my thoughts the hush of pines

5 Responses

  1. Andrea Says:

    very nice one-line!

  2. Helga Härle Says:

    summery magic!

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    This grows and grows on me. It must be good as I've done multiple readings and still enjoy its freshness.

    all my best,

    The With Words Haiku Competition 2010: http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html

  4. martin Says:

    It's very soothing.

  5. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Beautiful. Thank you.

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