slowly two clouds collide over rush hour
—C. P. Harrison
Issue 10.3 | 19 October 2010
rush hour– a line up of cars at a standstill
much love gillena
Wow, so many images this evokes. I'll never look at a cloud the same way. Nice job!
obscuring the sun, rimmed with light– brontosaurus? perhaps a horse…
nicely done!
in a clear blue sky towering clouds float freely imagination
I love the majesty of this. A wonderful haiku moment!
traffic jam a driver fingers the breeze through the sunroof
Alan Summers 1.‘The New Haiku’ Snapshot Press, 2002, ISBN 1-903543-03-7 2.Snapshots 2 April 1998 ISSN 1461-0833
down side streets – seagulls turning the sky in and out
Alan Summers 1.The New Haiku Snapshot Press, 2002, ISBN 1-903543-03-7 2.Presence #10 ISSN 1366-5367 1999 haiku presence webpage Editor's Choice 5 3. seagull haiku . . . a collection by various poets (August 2006)
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October 19th, 2010 at 4:22 pm
rush hour–
a line up of cars
at a standstill
much love
gillena
October 19th, 2010 at 4:24 pm
Wow, so many images this evokes. I'll never look at a cloud the same way. Nice job!
October 19th, 2010 at 4:24 pm
obscuring the sun,
rimmed with light–
brontosaurus? perhaps a horse…
October 20th, 2010 at 1:17 am
nicely done!
October 20th, 2010 at 9:00 am
in a clear blue sky
towering clouds float freely
imagination
October 20th, 2010 at 8:07 pm
I love the majesty of this. A wonderful haiku moment!
October 22nd, 2010 at 5:26 pm
traffic jam
a driver fingers the breeze
through the sunroof
Alan Summers
1.‘The New Haiku’ Snapshot Press, 2002, ISBN 1-903543-03-7
2.Snapshots 2 April 1998 ISSN 1461-0833
down side streets –
seagulls turning the sky
in and out
Alan Summers
1.The New Haiku Snapshot Press, 2002, ISBN 1-903543-03-7
2.Presence #10 ISSN 1366-5367 1999 haiku presence webpage Editor's Choice 5
3. seagull haiku . . . a collection by various poets (August 2006)