the train evaporates
into a distant horn
Previously published in The Heron’s Nest, June 2009.
Issue 10.3 | 20 October 2010
I've been lucky enough to hear this haiku live from Kala at the Royal Festival Hall as a guest of With Words and the London Haiku Group.
Area 17 blog account of the event: http://area17.blogspot.com/2010/09/kala-ramesh-sp…
I'm happy you could relate to this, Pamela
Oh, well done, Kala….shades of Hogwarts!
As Kala knows, I love this haiku.
If you google "Area 17 kala" you'll see _kala in action as the guest of With Words and the London Haiku Group.
Ha! Alan – I remember my London trip with such joy.
It was great meeting you, Karen, and all the members of the London haiku group, in person as well.
Thanks a ton Mary.
This is a memory ku, when we had visited Shimla some 20 years back. At that time I didn't even know an art-form like haiku existed!
Receiving appreciation always feels good :)
Another train haiku:
the night train passes
along the mountain trail
Azami #51 (Japan, Sept. 1998)
With Words: http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html
his eyes trace the tracks
this is a beauty.
relief at last…
moving out from
the madness of city
peace and love
How are you doing?
Your haiku brought a smile, very true!
Terrific haiku, and I love poems about trains too!
Alan, With Words
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