amid fallen leaves
a business card
still doing its job
A version of this haiku was previously published in the Texas 09 Haiku calendar.
It was one of the results of a self-assignment to write a haiku a day for one year.
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amid fallen leaves
a business card
still doing its job
A version of this haiku was previously published in the Texas 09 Haiku calendar.
It was one of the results of a self-assignment to write a haiku a day for one year.
Very nice, heavy with the poignant ephemeralness of identity.
I really like this. I'm also intrigued about what kind of business card, but that's not necessary to know to find this an excellent haiku.
Alan, With Words
Alan: Thank you for your comment. The business card still doing its job was for an architect.
Hi Janice,
I love that fact too! ;-)
Alan, With Words
Dirk: I like what you see in the haiku.
oh, this is so clever and so haunting in its imagery. Don't we all see this scene sometime or another! And yet , only you ku-ed it.
Hi Janice , i am new here and am glad to read your ku.
regards
anna9