commuter platform
a harmonica blowing
the freight train blues

6 Responses

  1. @Gen1941 Says:

    Morning –
    The city will wake from a sleep
    Tram roar

  2. gillena cox Says:

    counting
    days to Christmas
    the radio station

  3. daveserjeant Says:

    Hi Lorin – I just wanted to say how much I enjoy this haiku. I keep coming back to it as it can be read on so many different levels. Excellent stuff.

  4. @Zirconium Says:

    Enjoyed the juxtaposition of this with the Tokyo train poem posted the next day.

  5. d. f. tweney Says:

    Thanks for noticing that, Zirconium! I try to arrange the poems so there are interesting juxtapositions and segues like that.

  6. martin1223 Says:

    commuter
    windows
    following
    me
    down
    the
    aisle
    full
    moon

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