leaving the Tokyo subway,
a hundred umbrellas
rise in unison
Issue 10.3 | 19 November 2010
Entering the Toyko subway
A thousand umbrellas
Excellent poem, beautiful image. A reflection on interdependent cultures too.
Vivid sense of togetherness – especially love the musical sense in the word choice, "unison"
Excellent! This poem creates a strong image that's not easily forgotten.
Great images come to me with this, neat!
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