sheltered by the bus stop empties Originally published in where i leave off / waar ik ophoud Published by Jim Kacian Jim Kacian is Director of The Haiku Foundation and owner of Red Moon Press, which means he doesn't kayak enough. View all posts by Jim Kacian
hi jim this is difficult. sometims my haiku are quite hard to read. i sort of understand yours. but i would say it's an 'almost' marlene Reply
coolness of spring rain waiting with the bus queue on newly cut hair Alan Summers 1.Haiku Friends Vol. 3 Ed. Masaharu Hirata, Japan (2009) 2.Mainichi Shimbun 125th Anniversary (haiku contest) Anthology, Japan, (1997) 3.sundog haiku journal: an australian year sunfast press 1997 reprinted 1998 California State Library – Main Catalog Call Number : HAIKU S852su 1997 . Reply
hi jim this is difficult. sometims my haiku are quite hard to read.
i sort of understand yours. but i would say it's
an 'almost'
marlene
a gust of rain across the water turning up my collar
coolness of spring rain
waiting with the bus queue
on newly cut hair
Alan Summers
1.Haiku Friends Vol. 3 Ed. Masaharu Hirata, Japan (2009)
2.Mainichi Shimbun 125th Anniversary (haiku contest) Anthology, Japan, (1997)
3.sundog haiku journal: an australian year
sunfast press 1997 reprinted 1998
California State Library – Main Catalog Call Number : HAIKU S852su 1997
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alone with the bus stop empties
an empty beer can