night jog—
sparks from a train
rounding a turn

3 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Damn you! I bet you knew I was a sucker for train haiku. ;-)

    winter timetable-
    the late train leaves behind
    half a school trip

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: Blithe Spirit vol 17 no. 1 (2007); 4seasons Haiku anthology (2011)

  2. Helen Buckingham Says:

    So vivid and alive. Brilliant.

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    That combination of night jogging, and sparks off a train rounding a corner are terrific.

    Alan, With Words

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