the rabbit’s ears translucent at dawn
—John Savoie
Issue 11.1 | 7 April 2011
Finally a decent haiku in this list.
Blimey that's harsh.
John's is a good haiku so nice of him to hear you say that, but there's been some very good haiku in this batch too.
Alan
I echo Alan's sentiments.
A fine example of how a poem can evoke colors without mentioning the colors themselves. tinywords continues to excel in its choice and presentation of poetic short forms.
I’ve known this experience. Thanks for stirring that memory.
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April 7th, 2011 at 9:03 am
Finally a decent haiku in this list.
April 7th, 2011 at 10:13 am
Blimey that's harsh.
John's is a good haiku so nice of him to hear you say that, but there's been some very good haiku in this batch too.
Alan
April 7th, 2011 at 3:08 pm
I echo Alan's sentiments.
April 8th, 2011 at 4:11 am
A fine example of how a poem can evoke colors without mentioning the colors themselves. tinywords continues to excel in its choice and presentation of poetic short forms.
May 8th, 2011 at 6:45 pm
I’ve known this experience. Thanks for stirring that memory.