Grey dawn climbs the sky bird over bird.
—Jean Morris
Issue 11.2 | 13 October 2011
I really like your haiku poem, Jean. Great imagery _kala
Simple, in the best sense. Lovely. (I'd ditch the full stop though!)
Simple and well!! … Game with the sky – Single combat of a bird Through a head wind
Helen, you're right – now i see it here, I wish I'd left out the capital and the full stop!
The phrase "bird over bird" is especially beautiful for me: bird over bird hand over hand up and away! … this reader goes for today.
Thank you for this flowing image. I like it to the max!
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October 13th, 2011 at 8:29 am
I really like your haiku poem, Jean.
Great imagery
_kala
October 13th, 2011 at 11:22 am
Simple, in the best sense. Lovely. (I'd ditch the full stop though!)
October 13th, 2011 at 11:08 pm
Simple and well!!
…
Game with the sky –
Single combat of a bird
Through a head wind
October 14th, 2011 at 2:23 am
Helen, you're right – now i see it here, I wish I'd left out the capital and the full stop!
October 15th, 2011 at 5:27 am
The phrase "bird over bird" is especially beautiful for me:
bird over bird
hand over hand
up and away!
… this reader goes for today.
October 15th, 2011 at 2:42 pm
Thank you for this flowing image. I like it to the max!