Jean Morris lives in London, UK, blogs at http://tastingrhubarb.blogspot.com/ and writes daily 'small stones' of prose or poetry at http://jeanstrailmix.blogspot.com/.
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I really like your haiku poem, Jean.
Great imagery
_kala
I really like your haiku poem, Jean.
Great imagery
_kala
Simple, in the best sense. Lovely. (I'd ditch the full stop though!)
Simple and well!!
…
Game with the sky –
Single combat of a bird
Through a head wind
Helen, you're right – now i see it here, I wish I'd left out the capital and the full stop!
The phrase "bird over bird" is especially beautiful for me:
bird over bird
hand over hand
up and away!
… this reader goes for today.
Thank you for this flowing image. I like it to the max!