just this morning
the first magnolia buds
opening—
my mother?s unwed initials
on the suitcase she brought east
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just this morning
the first magnolia buds
opening—
my mother?s unwed initials
on the suitcase she brought east
Terrific!
Good decision to have the dash after opening so it's not an overt pivot line.
Simply wonderful tanka, and one I've enjoyed reading a few times already.
Alan, With Words
Thank you, Alan, for taking the time to comment. So glad it sustained a few reads — that's a lovely compliment!
my first time ever thanking someone for writing something I truly appreciate reading.
Heartfelt thanks,
Linda
Thanks so much, Linda — that's very touching to hear.
Excellent work Hannah. I absolutely love this tanka.
Oh, thanks, John!
Beautiful!
I just discovered this, Hannah, and keep rereading it. Another I wish I had written!!
clouded sky
between the branches
crab apples
Lovely–there was a magnolia tree on the street where my mother lived for decades. Best wishes, Ellen