he thinks again of turning leaves her hands
Issue 11.3 | 17 November 2011
thoughts of turning leaves her hand on his
to me, the 'on his' takes away the play on the word 'leaves….'
Yes, I have eliminated the subject for "thoughts". The "on' is her plea not to leave or just to comfort during this season of turning. Yours does open up many more possibilities….
[…] – Angie Werren, Tinywords […]
thank you, myron!
the red haired boy twirls
with the leaves
The status of an educated person in society can never be denied and even if a person is more educated than the other then the more educated person is superior to less educated person.
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