Yes, I have eliminated the subject for "thoughts". The "on' is her plea not to leave or just to comfort during this season of turning. Yours does open up many more possibilities….
The status of an educated person in society can never be denied and even if a person is more educated than the other then the more educated person is superior to less educated person.
November 18th, 2011 at 3:20 am
thoughts of turning leaves her hand on his
November 18th, 2011 at 4:53 am
thanks, marie.
to me, the 'on his' takes away the play on the word 'leaves….'
November 18th, 2011 at 1:44 pm
Yes, I have eliminated the subject for "thoughts". The "on' is her plea not to leave or just to comfort during this season of turning. Yours does open up many more possibilities….
November 21st, 2011 at 7:30 am
[…] – Angie Werren, Tinywords […]
November 23rd, 2011 at 6:39 pm
Congrats Angie!
November 24th, 2011 at 7:53 am
thank you, myron!
;)
November 30th, 2011 at 5:38 am
autumn dusk
the red haired boy twirls
with the leaves
December 11th, 2011 at 11:20 pm
lovely
July 6th, 2015 at 9:19 am
The status of an educated person in society can never be denied and even if a person is more educated than the other then the more educated person is superior to less educated person.