What a sad feeling you haiku leaves with me, Melissa. I usually associate the west wind with bringing my love home…as well as fair weather of sparkling days. I must say that it is so exquisitely done … playing upon the echo of romantic poetry… You certainly teach us all a thing or two along the way.
November 23rd, 2011 at 5:49 pm
Hi Melissa – Congratulations. I love the way you have created this desolate haiku.
November 23rd, 2011 at 5:49 pm
Great thought, wonderfully expressed!
November 23rd, 2011 at 7:51 pm
What a sad feeling you haiku leaves with me, Melissa. I usually associate the west wind with bringing my love home…as well as fair weather of sparkling days. I must say that it is so exquisitely done … playing upon the echo of romantic poetry… You certainly teach us all a thing or two along the way.
November 24th, 2011 at 2:40 am
This is lovely, Melissa – so compact yet limitless in its capacity to make the reader reflect.
November 24th, 2011 at 7:52 am
I agree with everyone — worlds within your words.
November 24th, 2011 at 6:03 pm
Wonderful!
Alan
November 26th, 2011 at 4:42 pm
The sweet angst of longing… nicely done, Melissa!
November 30th, 2011 at 5:17 am
Nor’easter
the house stuck on the road
December 3rd, 2011 at 4:30 am
beautiful and sad at the same time
December 11th, 2011 at 11:24 pm
yes i feel this one =)
January 15th, 2012 at 9:42 am
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