twilight trees birds go in and out of song
(previously published in Acorn #26 — Spring 2011)
—Kala Ramesh
Issue 12.1 | 12 October 2012
A lovely image — and very satisfying on more than one level as well.
Always a sucker for dusk/twilight poems.
autumn twilight . . . swan shapes separate for the lone boatman
Alan Summers
Publications credits: Snapshots 10 (2001); City: Bristol Today in Poems and Pictures (Paralalia 2004); BHS members anthology ‘River’ (2005); tinywords.com (2007)
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Enjoyed your lovely twilight poem! Thanks for sending us the link to this site. I'm enjoying Kala's fine haiku, also.
twilight a moth follows the stream
Beautiful Kala
in a hole through birdsong drips bougainvillaea
Scott Terrill
Publications credit: (Slater, B & Summers, A (eds.) 2012, Four Virtual Haiku Poets, Yet To Be Named Free Press, Stoke-on-Trent, England)
Excellent haiku, Kala. I see it right up there with Basho's "sound of water" haikai. o/ Jane
Thanks a ton for all your lovely comments. Wow! Jane, thanks a lot. Martin, Alan and Scott — v. nice response haiku. Enjoyed :) _kala
Beautiful, Kala.
marion
Simply beautiful, Kala.
Thanks a ton, Marion :)
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October 12th, 2012 at 4:13 pm
A lovely image — and very satisfying on more than one level as well.
October 12th, 2012 at 4:18 pm
Always a sucker for dusk/twilight poems.
autumn twilight . . .
swan shapes separate
for the lone boatman
Alan Summers
Publications credits:
Snapshots 10 (2001); City: Bristol Today in Poems and Pictures (Paralalia 2004); BHS members anthology ‘River’ (2005); tinywords.com (2007)
.
October 13th, 2012 at 3:24 pm
Enjoyed your lovely twilight poem! Thanks for sending us the link to this site. I'm enjoying Kala's fine haiku, also.
October 12th, 2012 at 7:34 pm
twilight
a moth follows
the stream
October 15th, 2012 at 4:45 am
Beautiful Kala
in a hole
through birdsong drips
bougainvillaea
Scott Terrill
Publications credit:
(Slater, B & Summers, A (eds.) 2012, Four Virtual Haiku Poets, Yet To Be Named Free Press, Stoke-on-Trent, England)
October 15th, 2012 at 9:31 am
Excellent haiku, Kala. I see it right up there with Basho's "sound of water" haikai.
o/ Jane
October 15th, 2012 at 10:38 am
Thanks a ton for all your lovely comments.
Wow! Jane, thanks a lot.
Martin, Alan and Scott — v. nice response haiku.
Enjoyed :)
_kala
October 15th, 2012 at 1:50 pm
Beautiful, Kala.
marion
October 16th, 2012 at 7:45 am
Simply beautiful, Kala.
marion
October 17th, 2012 at 1:26 pm
Thanks a ton, Marion :)
January 22nd, 2013 at 11:47 pm
Your website is very chatty. It will be useful for all of us. You have done a work. I will come here again to inspect new updates. Thanks for posting.
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