distant thunder
ants inside
a broken egg shell

9 Responses

  1. Lisa Brown Says:

    Oh. Oh. Oh. Love this one.

  2. Ross Says:

    Holy sh*t, I love it, too!

  3. @undefined Says:

    broken flower pot _peering from under pieces _a fat toad

  4. harrisfr Says:

    Covers the known world! Simply so fine! Thank you.

  5. Alan Summers Says:


    four rosellas distant sounds fade to blue

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: Azami #34 (Japan 1996)


  6. polona Says:

    thanks, everyone. appreciate your comments

  7. Berenice Mortimer Says:

    So loved your "persimmon sky" haiku in the March issue of "The Heron's Nest" that I have just awarded it first place in my
    Readers' Choice.

    Berenice Mortimer.

  8. polona Says:

    oh, wow! thank you so much, Berenice. i wouldn't award it that many points if i could vote for it :)

  9. Robert Says:

    Wonderful – beautifully abstract, dramatically detailed.

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